Need some help from Coffee Connoiseurs...

[thebeanexperience]

Hi Coffee Connoisseurs,

Is the following prospect interesting?

Amazing Coffee Blends from around the world, delivered to your door

The Bean Experience will be a world tour of coffee, and I am interested in hearing your thoughts about this.

Like it, love it or hate it, let me know your thoughts

http://unbouncepages.com/the-bean-experience/

 

[John P]

Poorly worded, and possibly poorly executed.

1) A coffee connoisseur does not want a blend of coffees. Single origin. Select farm. Select crop. Trying to use the words connoisseur and blend together doesn't work.

2) There's no listing of the roasters you are using. You haven't established any trust with the customer that you are actually sending them good coffee. You need to at the very least, list the roasters that you are including and WHY they are great roasters producing great coffee.