"Cold Brewed" -- A Film Noir for the Coffee Culture

[Lancelot]

Newest favorite:

Episode 10: The Case and The Chase

 

[PinkRose]

Nicely done! This episode must have taken a long time to do. The roof-top chase scene has a lot going on.

After reading the past few episodes, things have started to make better sense now.

Rose

 

[Lancelot]

Nicely done! This episode must have taken a long time to do. The roof-top chase scene has a lot going on.

After reading the past few episodes, things have started to make better sense now.

Rose

Great! That's good to hear. Still tweaking to try to find the right blend of words and pictures. We can't assume too much or too little with this medium, so it'll take a little while to get it figured out.

The hope is to get it published, but we'll need to really work out the kinks. Your honest has helped a lot, Rose, so thanks.

The other thing is, I know that you, me, and coffeejunkie aren't the only ones on here -- there's over 2,000 views of this thread. If you're reading this, I'd love your input!

- Lancelot

 

[PinkRose]

So, the next time I notice spelling errors, should I point them out to you??

 

[Lancelot]

So, the next time I notice spelling errors, should I point them out to you??

Please do. It's a passion project so it doesn't get as much attention as our for-pay work. We rely on fan feedback for tweaking -- lots of great suggestions via the facebook page have made it better.

thanks!

 

[Lancelot]

And here's the beginning of the end for Jett Cropper:

Episode 11: Tough Teeth

 

[PinkRose]

When I look at this segment, I'm seeing a lot of plain black boxes where I expect photos to be. Did you do that on purpose to represent him being blacked out, or are the photos not showing up on my screen?

 

[Lancelot]

When I look at this segment, I'm seeing a lot of plain black boxes where I expect photos to be. Did you do that on purpose to represent him being blacked out, or are the photos not showing up on my screen?

On purpose for the blackouts, yup.

Thanks!

 

[Lancelot]

For late comers, we made two summary posts:

Act One: Jett Cropper and the Chicory Dose

Act Two: Jett Cropper and The Bearded Lady

Enjoy!

- Llot

 

[PinkRose]

In Act One, the photos #32 through 53 seem to be missing. (at least for me they are). All I see is a small box with a red X and a number in each top left corner)

 

[Lancelot]

In Act One, the photos #32 through 53 seem to be missing. (at least for me they are). All I see is a small box with a red X and a number in each top left corner)

Did you try reloading? We haven't been able to duplicate that response...

 

[Lancelot]

Season Finale: "Vice is a Monster"

 

[PinkRose]

Lancelot,

All of the photos showed up today, so I guess it was a hiccup with my computer last week.

Congratulations on completing the final episode! It's obvious that a lot of work and creative talent went into producing the whole series.

I hope you, and the rest of the team, did something fun to celebrate!

Thanks again for sharing "Cold Brewed" with the Coffee Forum.

Rose

 

[Lancelot]

So... we took down all of the content.

But only because we're turning it into an iPad book! It looks and works WAY better in this medium, and the story makes more sense. Here's a preview:

Preview of Cold Brewed.

 

[PinkRose]

Hello Lancelot

I was wondering how things were going with you. I had a feeling you were busy making improvements and adjustments on your final product.

I took a look at the preview, and it seems to be moving a bit fast. It doesn't leave enough time to read the words on the slide before it moves on to the next one.

Best wishes for a lot of success. You and your team worked very hard to get to where you are now!

Rose